My first composition in my old space was "My TV and radio programs favourites". Let's compare that writing with my current compositions.
First difference I see is the comas use: we can see a lot of comas (Example: All this programs, have one thing in common). Nowadays I think I use comas good (more or less)
Other difference is that before in never used relative pronouns. You can't find and relative pronoun in my first composition. Now, I use them a lot (maybe too much)
Third change I can see is the verbal tenses I used. For example: This program imite. Besides, verb "imite" doesn't exists, it should be "mimic" or something similar.
Sentences constructions has changed too. There are a lot of "strange" sentences (example: This program is one zapping program but is a diferent zapping program) Maybe today I would say "This program is similar to a zapping program" or something similar to that.
Other change I see is prepositions use. We can see for entertain; it should be "to entertain". Other example: boys in 17, 18.
Apart from linguistic aspects, it's also a topic change. Before I talked about MotoGP, F1, TV programs... Now, I try vary topics and I talk about books, films, reports, etc.
Apart from linguistic aspects, it's also a topic change. Before I talked about MotoGP, F1, TV programs... Now, I try vary topics and I talk about books, films, reports, etc.
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